In fifth grade, Vincent was feeling his worst. Because he still had the ingrown toe nails, people exercise with ingrown toe nails all the time sweets. he could not exercise and as such, became overweight. Then because of his father, how did his father cause this? he had no friends and everyone hated him because he grew to become antisocial and he ended up becoming some what of an outcastrun on sentence. Because he had no friends, he turned toward the internet for help. There he found XQUEENXOFXALLXGOTHSX. She understood him, and tried to help him, and what came out was a friendship like no other.
When Vincent’s family decided to move, his father said that he did not want to go with them, because he knew he was in a bad state of mind and did not want Vincent to see his down fall and everyone knew that he was dieingdying.
After the fifth grade, things started to look up. But only for a while. The middle school in which he went to was better then elementary school in a way that the teachers accepted him more. But that was the only good thing that had happened to him. Most of the time he was by himself, wishing that he could escape the world God had putted him put him in. One of the most important examples was the P.E. coaches. There were four of them and they tortured him to no end all the time. First example was the fact that he could not run. And because of that, they continuously kept on failing failed him. Kids made fun of him because he was over weight, and they started stealing his possessions and destroying anything he owned.
Then, toward the end of the year, two shocking things happened that changed him forever. First had to do with what this kid done did to him. What he done was this., he wanted to know if Vincent was a male or female. So to find out, he punched him in the testicle. Because of that, the kid was suspended for the remainder of the school year. This changed every chance he had ever gotten had to having getting friends. Sense since there were no witnesses to the event, everyone believed Vincent made it up just for attention. The second event was much worse.
combine to last paragraph One week before the last week of school, two weeks before school ended, Vincent got some of the worst news in the world his life. He still remembers the events as if they had just happened: you use this type of saying twice change one of them please?
Walking up the bleachers during the last school fellowship was he going to a catholic school and if so say it somewhere before this. was The Assistant Principal of Discipline. She eyed Vincent. She singled signaled him to come down. When he did, she motioned he is already up to her so have her tell him maybe. him to follow her out of the auditoriumthere are bleacher in the auditorium?.
“You need to go and get all of your things.” She said with a grim attitude. He went to his language arts room to retrieved verb predicate agreement is incorrect.all of his belongings. There were few things for him to get;, mostly books. He followed her toward the front hall. Out side was one of the counselors.
“Vincent!” she called him how did she call him? excaited, worried, strict?to come and see her. When he walked into her office, his mom was there. ‘What know now?’ he thought as he sat down. In her office was the other principals staff members, there's only a principal and a vice principal. and counselors.
“Mom, what is going on?” he looked into her eyes and could see tears streaming down her face.
“Vincent,” his mothers voice cracked and sounded distraught sound crack and distraught. “I was about to order our plane tickets to see your father in Memphis, but before I did, I had this weird feeling. So I called your father to see if he was alright. But when I called, move it to after 'the hotel' the hotel theychecked his room.” she took a long pause. “When they came back they told me he was… dead.” At that moment, Vincent’s entire world fell to pieces. He started crying, slamming his wrist why not his arm? and why where all the peoples there for this? against the table, yelling at the top of his lungs. The principals decide to let the Gesudio family a week off to mourn over Vincent’s father’s death.
While at inMemphis, they found out that Vincent’s father had a life insurance policy on him maybe say how much it was worth?. With the money, it was instructed that they were to move out of there apartment and move somewhere else. It took three years of planning, but they s found there destination: Colorado. Vincent’s mother had always loved Colorado, so they decide to move there. Which leads use usto present day.
Saturday, September 10, 2011
Friday, September 9, 2011
chapter 2 part 1
As you might be wondering, how did Vincent meet the mysterious XQUEENXOFXALLXGOTHSX? Well, to answer that question, I must tell you Vincent’s past. I know, it maybe long, tedious, and boring, but in a way, it might be crucial later on as this story progresses. I would just jump into the story, the intro isn't really neccissary.
Vincent GesuDio’s earliest memory happened when he was only three years old. He could not remember anything else that had happened before hand, though he wished that he could remember events prior to this. The memory was of his late father. His father was a chronic alcoholic and when Vincent was three, he started to realize how it would destroy his family.
While Vincent made people assume that his home life was nice and good [find synonyms], in reality, it was not. Vincent’s family was starting to separate at the seams because of his father. One of the best examples was on Christmas Day. His father, drunk, took the family car and drove away. The police found him, but to what ^the news they delivered, the family would never expect. To this day, Vincent can remember all of the details of what had happen.
A bang.[not nessisarry] A huge bang on the wooden door at the front of the house. A tired woman by the name of Veronica (mom) ^ vincents mother veronica walked to the front door, pushing back the huge, gray cat. Behind the door, was a buffed and tall ^tall, butff police officer.
“Veronica GesuDio?” he asked, uncertainly.
“Yes?”
“My name is Lieutenant Nick Keitel. May I come in?”
“Have you found my husband?” she asked hopefully. The police officer just shacked [shook?] his head and pulled out a piece of paper.
“May I come in?”
“Oh, yes, please.” she said hopefully as she lead him into Vincent’s office. Once in there, [maybe explain where the coffee came from?] she pulled out two cups of coffee and they started talking.
“The good news is that we found him. But before we go on, you need to see this photo.” Handing her the photo, she just screamed and started to cry in pure, agonizing shock. The photo showed Vincent’s father but crushed up and with some heavy skin damage done, especially where the leg was, revealing the metal archetype that had been replaced. “Right now, he is being held in the state’s prison hospital.”
“Prison hospital?!” Veronica said.
“Yes, prison.” Lieutenant Cage [name change?]said with a heavy sigh. “You see, Mrs. GesuDio, when he was found, the car he was driving was destroyed. It is a miracle that he is still living. But, when we cleaned up the scene, we found the corpses of a child. When he gets out of the hospital, he will be sent to court where he will await trail. But, right now, I need you to come down town to fill out some paper work. Bring your kids.” When she went to get Vincent, he told her he did not want to go. The officer did tell told him it will be awhile until she comes back, but even with that, he still said no make its it's own sentence with different wording please. When they left, Vincent did not wake up. [add to next paragraph & what about the trial?] When he awoken much later, he saw the ridiculously mangled body of his father in the guest room, with a police tracker on his ankle.
Because Vincent had rich grandparents, they were able to bail out his father, and, it was a good and bad thing. It was a good thing because his father started developing cancer ^how is this a good thing? in his back, legs, heart, and head. It was bad because he started getting addicted to pain killers and more drugs like alcohol wasn't he already an alcoholic? and Morphine. It was ^also bad because during the that time, Vincent’s family started falling behind on bill payments, loans, and taxes. Sadly, they had no money to pay off these debts because every time they did, his father would spend the money on drugs. And, over time, the ???
His mother on the other hand, was on her own, ^and right, too informal not in good condition. Due to the fact that she was in pain, she decided to lock herself up in her bedroom during this time. Sense Since {sense is as in the five senses]Vincent did not want to be around the depressing state of his father, his father in such a depressing state, so he decided to be around his mother and threw through her he started to learn more about why his father is an alcoholic and why he can't be helped, and to top it all off he was only in the forth grade All of that was in the fourth grade.
Vincent GesuDio’s earliest memory happened when he was only three years old. He could not remember anything else that had happened before hand, though he wished that he could remember events prior to this. The memory was of his late father. His father was a chronic alcoholic and when Vincent was three, he started to realize how it would destroy his family.
While Vincent made people assume that his home life was nice and good [find synonyms], in reality, it was not. Vincent’s family was starting to separate at the seams because of his father. One of the best examples was on Christmas Day. His father, drunk, took the family car and drove away. The police found him, but to what ^the news they delivered, the family would never expect. To this day, Vincent can remember all of the details of what had happen.
A bang.[not nessisarry] A huge bang on the wooden door at the front of the house. A tired woman by the name of Veronica (mom) ^ vincents mother veronica walked to the front door, pushing back the huge, gray cat. Behind the door, was a buffed and tall ^tall, butff police officer.
“Veronica GesuDio?” he asked, uncertainly.
“Yes?”
“My name is Lieutenant Nick Keitel. May I come in?”
“Have you found my husband?” she asked hopefully. The police officer just shacked [shook?] his head and pulled out a piece of paper.
“May I come in?”
“Oh, yes, please.” she said hopefully as she lead him into Vincent’s office. Once in there, [maybe explain where the coffee came from?] she pulled out two cups of coffee and they started talking.
“The good news is that we found him. But before we go on, you need to see this photo.” Handing her the photo, she just screamed and started to cry in pure, agonizing shock. The photo showed Vincent’s father but crushed up and with some heavy skin damage done, especially where the leg was, revealing the metal archetype that had been replaced. “Right now, he is being held in the state’s prison hospital.”
“Prison hospital?!” Veronica said.
“Yes, prison.” Lieutenant Cage [name change?]said with a heavy sigh. “You see, Mrs. GesuDio, when he was found, the car he was driving was destroyed. It is a miracle that he is still living. But, when we cleaned up the scene, we found the corpses of a child. When he gets out of the hospital, he will be sent to court where he will await trail. But, right now, I need you to come down town to fill out some paper work. Bring your kids.” When she went to get Vincent, he told her he did not want to go. The officer did tell told him it will be awhile until she comes back, but even with that, he still said no make its it's own sentence with different wording please. When they left, Vincent did not wake up. [add to next paragraph & what about the trial?] When he awoken much later, he saw the ridiculously mangled body of his father in the guest room, with a police tracker on his ankle.
Because Vincent had rich grandparents, they were able to bail out his father, and, it was a good and bad thing. It was a good thing because his father started developing cancer ^how is this a good thing? in his back, legs, heart, and head. It was bad because he started getting addicted to pain killers and more drugs like alcohol wasn't he already an alcoholic? and Morphine. It was ^also bad because during the that time, Vincent’s family started falling behind on bill payments, loans, and taxes. Sadly, they had no money to pay off these debts because every time they did, his father would spend the money on drugs. And, over time, the ???
His mother on the other hand, was on her own, ^and right, too informal not in good condition. Due to the fact that she was in pain, she decided to lock herself up in her bedroom during this time. Sense Since {sense is as in the five senses]Vincent did not want to be around the depressing state of his father, his father in such a depressing state, so he decided to be around his mother and threw through her he started to learn more about why his father is an alcoholic and why he can't be helped, and to top it all off he was only in the forth grade All of that was in the fourth grade.
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